Score: 5

"wiu"

submission: Yeah Toast!

date: April 27, 2007

The animation itself wasnt that great.. it wasnt bad either..
The sets of pics didnt help much, I wish it was more animated.

But tbh you had me laughing at the dancing bread throught the animation :p

Score: 7

"nice"

submission: Hey!

date: October 3, 2006

I liked the style.. I just have to comment on the back-stop-forward-fast forward buttons that appear on the top. At first I didnt notice it untill I tried stopping it. Great addition I must say, I think a lot of animations lack that.

Score: 4

"too much reading.."

submission: Megaman SZ episode 1

date: October 3, 2006

I think this needs more action and less reading.. it got kinda boring in some parts..
It was hard to read some parts of it, I think the background didnt help much. You could try to increase the % of alpha for the text box background..
I liked some of the sprytes used and the general idea of the flash..
could there be some sort of intoduction before the first battle? it just doesnt seem to fit in unless you add something like megaman talking with burstman.
The music in general is good, except for the first song (the one at the loading screen).. its kind of annoying :S
If you could add more SFX sounds that would be swell

Score: 4

".."

submission: Game Players Ep:1

date: September 10, 2006

It was a nice start, but it needs to be longer.. way longer.. it needs to have a complete story (start, climax, ending)..

Another thing, you should consider redrawing the loading screen.. it should have better quality..

Score: 1

"huh??"

submission: how to makes an movie

date: December 8, 2005

what is wrong with your spelling?? not just the spelling.. what bout the grammar?! I personally did not like this.. it was pretty bad.. it looks like you just put whatever you could find in there..

Score: 6

"its kinda nice"

submission: Metal Gear Ultima 1

date: December 8, 2005

you should double check you spelling.. if you really arent that good in spelling (like me) you should make somenoe else who is to check it for you..
by the way, this was good but it becomes really boring since it doesnt have very good music.. also the characters need some voice acting.. or something..

Score: 6

"pretty good"

submission: The Real World: Part 2

date: November 23, 2005

you must have a lot of patience to make this.. well it was good.. voices not so good.. i know wvery must tell you this and you already know it so i wont say anything more about it.. you should get more people to act the voices of the other clay people.. or at least try harder to make you voice sound different

Score: 5

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submission: kewl tutorial mix

date: November 23, 2005

Its good that there are still pepople who care for other fellow newgrounders.. ahmm its not bad.. but it needs some minor fixes.. like the back button and ahmm you should check the tools section.. (preview it and then drag your mouse over the black screen.. you should see the instruccions for the tool buttons when your mouse points to the black screen.. mybe im not good with explaining so just go check it and you will se what i mean)

Score: 3

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submission: A King For 1000 Years PV

date: November 23, 2005

well the sound was good.. the drawings.. ehm.. not so good.. but that wasnt the problem.. the problem was that this didnt have much animation.. it needs life.. people moving.. people dying (the monk, satan whatever it is looks like its being squashed or something..)..

Score: 5

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submission: Theatre Previews 2

date: October 25, 2005

I like that the preloader wasnt like other preloders.. but next time dont put two play buttons.. make so that the blue screens appears right after the movie has finished loading.. and uhmm this was good, in a way but i didnt see much animation.. maybe if you add some more animation and it will be good