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I think this needs more action and less reading.. it got kinda boring in some parts..
It was hard to read some parts of it, I think the background didnt help much. You could try to increase the % of alpha for the text box background..
I liked some of the sprytes used and the general idea of the flash..
could there be some sort of intoduction before the first battle? it just doesnt seem to fit in unless you add something like megaman talking with burstman.
The music in general is good, except for the first song (the one at the loading screen).. its kind of annoying :S
If you could add more SFX sounds that would be swell

Author's Response:

thanks for the extensive review. as i said in the authors comments, this is just the first one with alot of talking and getting used to the storyline. there will be more action in the sequels. and i will also make the textbox with 100% alpha. and the first fight didnt have much point, it was kind of just an intro thing. and i was gonna add SFX but i forgot :p

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Score: 1

"huh??"

submission: how to makes an movie

date: December 8, 2005

what is wrong with your spelling?? not just the spelling.. what bout the grammar?! I personally did not like this.. it was pretty bad.. it looks like you just put whatever you could find in there..

Author's Response:

You are not one to talk about spelling, "anarkyboy"

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Score: 6

"its kinda nice"

submission: Metal Gear Ultima 1

date: December 8, 2005

you should double check you spelling.. if you really arent that good in spelling (like me) you should make somenoe else who is to check it for you..
by the way, this was good but it becomes really boring since it doesnt have very good music.. also the characters need some voice acting.. or something..

Author's Response:

1 question...did you read the authors notes?
thanks for the review anyway...

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Score: 5

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submission: Theatre Previews 2

date: October 25, 2005

I like that the preloader wasnt like other preloders.. but next time dont put two play buttons.. make so that the blue screens appears right after the movie has finished loading.. and uhmm this was good, in a way but i didnt see much animation.. maybe if you add some more animation and it will be good

Author's Response:

Alrighty, the 3rd (if I make one) will have much more animation.

Thanks for the review.

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Score: 7

"I see you like making tutorials"

submission: Ultimate Compression Tute

date: April 17, 2004

its good to see somebody who cares about new flash users. even though he knows haters will try to blam his tutorilas. I like them a lot because it helps me undersatand stuff that i probably didnt know. just one thing, your style needs improving.. it gets kinda boring watching the same style tutorial over and over..

Author's Response:

Yeah ima make a whole new more elaborate setup, thanks for you insight:)

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Score: 0

"duh"

submission: A Turban-Guy Eyester

date: April 9, 2004

this is overall just boring

Author's Response:

right....

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Score: 10

"jajaja"

submission: Clockident Evil

date: October 16, 2003

this was funny, the only thing.. is why do you keep on doing clock animations if you know they suck and nobody likes then??

Author's Response:

I don't I think lots of people like them. Just like I like anyother kind of animations, the only thing I hate is people that hate an animation b'cos of the style (Sprite, Clock, Stick). I think if it's good you should review high no matter what the style is, and if it's bad give tips and don't be a dick saying..."OMFG THIS SUCKS HAHAHAH!!!" Anyway Thx.